He thus forces us to be active readers, connecting the dots and filling in the blanks. I drank much of it," merely implying the relationship. Instead of writing "I drank much wine because it was good," Hemingway writes "The wine was good. A lack of clarity in the relationship between one sentence and the next.Here's an example of the latter: "After a while we came out of the mountains, and there were trees along both sides of the road, and a stream and ripe fields of grain, and the road went on, very white and straight ahead, and then lifted to a little rise, and off on the left was a hill with an old castle, with buildings close around it and a field of grain going right up to the walls and shifting in the wind" (The Sun Also Rises, Chapter X). Short sentences ("It was a fine morning.") or long sentences consisting of short phrases and clauses connected by conjunctions.(The best-known sentences she ever wrote were "A rose is a rose is a rose" and "When you get there, there's no there there.") This is a technique he learned from Stein. Frequent repetition of the same words and phrases.I liked the way they talked." Hemingway may have been inspired by the ways in which these European cultures, all of which he admired, managed to communicate effectively, even poetically, using so few words. The English talked with inflected phrases. Talking about Brett and Mike's speech, Jake Barnes tells us that "The English spoken language - the upper classes, anyway - must have fewer words than the Eskimo.
Each of these has a much smaller vocabulary than English, and yet each manages to be richly expressive. Hemingway was fluent in three romance languages: French, Spanish, and Italian. She was built with curves like the hull of a racing yacht, and you missed none of it with that wool jersey." True, he tells the reader that she "was damned good-looking." But then he offers us the following concrete details linked by action verbs: "She wore a slipover jersey sweater and a tweed skirt, and her hair was brushed back like a boy's.
Remember, too, Jake's initial description of Brett. "Abstract words such as glory, honor, courage or hallow were obscene beside the concrete names of villages, the numbers of roads, the names of rivers, the numbers of regiments and the dates." Indeed, the first part of The Sun Also Rises overflows with the names of streets and cafés in 1920s Paris, to the extent that one almost needs a map of the city to follow the story's action. "I was always embarrassed by the words sacred, glorious, and sacrifice and the expression in vain," Frederic Henry says in A Farewell to Arms. This is closely related to Hemingway's preference for the actual versus the abstract.